Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Tuesday Tickler - Loonie Love Limerick

Loonie Love Limerick
by Rachel Hoyt
 
image by razvan ionut via freedigitalphotos.net
 
 
A woman was peeved at her mate
for not taking her on a date.
Her love was the sky.
She wanted to fly,
 
 
© 2012 Rachel Hoyt. All rights reserved.

Technorati Tags: , , , , ,

This poem was written for Mad Kane's Limerick-Off contest,
where there are so many laughs, it's hard to be the best.
 
 
P.S.  A loonie's a person who loves balloons.
You can see more here. (No, it is not cartoons.)

26 comments:

  1. Dear Rachel,
    This sure sounds loonie and I don't know whether to laugh or feel sad, but thanks for sharing all the same.

    300th Post - A Guest In Your Heart

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I did a little of both, Andy - laugh and be sad. I talk to my kitty like that, but... :o/

      Delete
  2. Clever and entertaining--and made me smile!!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you, Audrey. :) I thought the balloon deserved a voice in the relationship. LOL :)

      Delete
  3. Awesome, short, sweet, a story in a limerick!

    ReplyDelete
  4. ha...tethered she seems for better or worse...smiles.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Love limericks. Mad Kane's blog is a lot of fun. Look forward to the Limerick-off she hosts. This is a fun piece. Great job. Thanks for sharing here on D'Verse.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks vor visiting from d'verse, Fred! :) I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.

      Delete
  6. lovely rhyme that as always makes me smile : ) thank you x

    ReplyDelete
  7. Replies
    1. There's a popper in near every room! LOL

      Delete
  8. That was a loony one! LOL!

    http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.in/2012/08/gone.html

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. It is pretty hard to believe as true... too loony! :)

      Delete
  9. This was very clever... it left me with a big smile, just what I needed.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yay! I'm glad I could be your smile medicine today. :)

      Delete
  10. ahh--but to be able to fly! a really cute verse!

    ReplyDelete
  11. LOL! Fun limerick. What a crazy story!

    Thanks as always for your fun contributions to my Limerick-Offs!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you, Madeleine! Thanks as always for the poem prompt. :)

      Delete
  12. Very fun! Mary Poppins, let's go fly a kite :-

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Awww, a kite and a balloon would make a cute couple. :)

      Delete

Rhyming or not, I would like a lot to hear the thoughts my words brought...